"This is your destiny Micky you have no other choice, what other option do we have?" I replied.
"You watch Jaymes I am go..." Micky started to say.
All of a sudden the door opens to the basement and everyone begins to run,screaming hysterically. He arrived Sebastian in all of his evilness came in looking for more bodies to sacrifice. This time he only went for two of us Emily and Sandra. It had been months of worry and hysteria but luckily Micky and I were still alive. No one really knew what went on in the other room but we definitely could guess. Once you went in you never came back out. Whatever it was it wasn't anything any of us wanted to experience.
"Please save me," Emily's voice got weaker and weaker from the other side of the door. She was a nice girl I thought. This is so unfair there must be a way out. We didn't deserve this life. Who would be so mean as to do something so evil to us?
Daylight broke. Micky and I kept track of the days together. There was a little crack under the door where the sunlight would play peek a boo with us a few hours at a time.
Footsteps.
The Door creaks.
Here we go again.
Micky and I held our breath and went to our usual hiding spot behind a dusty box in the corner.
More footsteps.
We hear a scream.
"Micky," I whispered.
Micky glanced at me giving me the "not now Jaymes" look.
Another scream.
This time the scream came from the other side of the box.
“Micky, Micky, Micky.”
No response.
“Micky!” I yelled again.
No answer.
“Run Jaymes, run.”
I looked up and there he was in the grasp of Sebastian. I quickly turned around ready to run full speed in the other direction only to smack right into the dusty box.
As I came to I looked around I felt a shooting pain coming from my back. We all reached our destiny. The other room. Not quite like I pictured it. It was dark just like the other room. Only this room had a bunch of hooks and a lamp. I looked around and my fellow brothers and sisters were all on hooks like I was. Nya was on the floor lifeless. All I can think is that He got to her. Yes Sebastian definitely took her life. I turned to my left and Micky was waking up.
"Jaymes where are we?" he whispered.
"In the other room."
Micky opened his eyes wide indicating that he knew our desitny was coming up. I have to get us out of here I thought. I moved around and around and comouldn't get off the hook.
The door begins to open slowly and Sebastian walks in.
Micky yells, "He is not taking me!"
Micky maneuvers his way off the hook meanwhile Sebastian grabs a hold of me. I didn't know what to do or think. This is the end of my life as I know it.
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"Jaymes where are we?" he whispered.
"In the other room."
Micky opened his eyes wide indicating that he knew our desitny was coming up. I have to get us out of here I thought. I moved around and around and comouldn't get off the hook.
The door begins to open slowly and Sebastian walks in.
Micky yells, "He is not taking me!"
Micky maneuvers his way off the hook meanwhile Sebastian grabs a hold of me. I didn't know what to do or think. This is the end of my life as I know it.
http://www.viddler.com/explore/kerisaj/videos/2/
I really enjoyed your story for a lot of reasons that may lead into a big paragraph. However it seems you had wrote the story script to the clip and maybe even the whole movie if there is one. Might be something i may use to help write my story...
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